Sunday, June 2, 2013

Free romantic stories online The Temptation of a Kiss ~ Chapter 17

~ Chapter 17 ~
Landon was leaning on the railing right outside the french doors. Running his hand up through his hair he let out a long breath. Damn it! How the hell did she know I was here? “Good evening,” he finally said in a low impersonal tone. Good evening? I'm standing outside her door as she sits in a bath and this is all I come up with? Landon cupped his hand over his mouth and shook his head. Idiot.

How long have you been here?” Brook asked but praying it wasn't long enough to hear her conversation with Sarah.

Too long I suppose,” he replied. Little trickles of water falling from her body splashed gently into the water as she sponged along the length of her arm. He could see it all. She looked stunning in the candle lit room. Hair pinned up with nothing but bare skin glistening with water.

Did you happen to start peeping before or after Sarah's arrival?” Brook asked as if she could care either way.

Landon cleared his throat. “Before and I am not peeping.” He did his best to sound serious and somewhat offended by her insinuation.

She could hear his smile in his words. “Oh no? So you are not standing against the railing, I'm assuming, and quietly watching without an idea of what to do from this moment forth?” Brook sat up slightly straighter allowing her breasts to peer above the rim. A grunting noise came from across the threshold of the doors. “What was that, Lord Fields? I did not quite hear you.”

Slow deep breaths was all he could manage. Her full large breasts captivated his gaze as they bounced against the motion of the swirling water around her. I could watch her all night. She's acting as if I was not standing here.

Brook placed the sponge to the back of her neck and wrung the water out over her. Sitting up completely now the rim of the tub revealed everything from her lower waist upward. Letting her head fall back she dipped the sponge into the water and brought it up above her chin and slowly squeezed. “Mm,” she moaned.

He gazed at the steady stream of water splash on her neck and flow down over her chest dripping off her erect nipples. “My god,” he whispered. His mouth was overly wet as he licked his lips. If she pushes this any further I will. His thought seized as Brook reached up and removed the pins holding her hair in place. Thick long red locks fell around her shoulders and down covering her breasts. This is unreal. Wait what is she doing?

She immersed herself under the water and then just as quickly as she descended she emerged up straight. Brushing the bathwater off her face Brook pushed back her hair as well. Slowly licking her wet lips she said, “You may want to take your leave now, Lord Fields. I will have to stand to wash my body soon and do not want to torture you further.”

Torture does not begin to describe what you are doing to me, Red. Brutalize or punish may be better suited words of choice here.

I assure you I will be fine. If you are at all insecure with me standing outside your room than by all means I will not hesitate in bidding you a good night,” Landon said in a steady tone.

Brook was tongue-tied for a trice and then a small giggle escaped out of her. He is challenging me. How amusing…insecure. If it is temptation he desires than it will be a wicked enticement he will endure.

Your presence does not unsettle me in the least bit. I will admit though, I am curious as to why you seem to find yourself in my room or within the proximity of it every night.” Brook wet her sponge again and began to wash her shoulder. “The thought as you have told it is just simply for a silly little kiss does not warrant such behavior.”

Oh no?” he replied.

I would say not,” Brook said. “Is it at all possible you visit nightly in hopes that I will invite you into my bed?”

Landon chuckled. “If it is your bed I desired to be in I would have already been in it, but that is not the reasons.” He shifted from the uncomfortable throbbing that was now verging on painful. If I wasn’t so bloody hard I could play this game all night with her. I cannot believe she is this tempting in such a naughty way. I assumed she would be playful but this is mind blowing.

If I were to ask of your other reasons, would you confess them to me?” Brook’s voice was soft and smothered with a sensual tone that was everything suggestively improper.

He watched her deliberately lean back pushing her chest upwards and to his shock she pressed her delicate hands to her breasts squeezing them both gently together moving in a circular motion.

Taking a few steps forward he suddenly stilled as she rubbed her thumb and finger down to the tips of her nipples and clasped them before releasing. Landon gazed at her mouth parting open. Red supple lips made the most beautiful shape for him. His throbbing length began to dip with needy release. Damn it. Placing his handover himself, Landon pressed his erection against his hip where the tip was uncontrollably seeping through his breeches now. I have never had this happen before. What the bloody hell is she doing to me? I have less self-control then a school boy right now. Landon didn’t move until it stopped. Not a full climax but it was close to it.

Brook’s risqué demeanor was far beyond suggestive and she had never felt more herself or free in her life. If this is to be the one night I am to have with him, than it will be a night he will forever compare against all others after me. Gradually she moved her feet up on the rim of the tub curling her toes over a bit in a seductive playful way. Brook extended one leg upright in the air.

You haven’t yet answered my question, Landon.”

His fists tightened a second at the sound of her voice. He was mere steps away from the door and could see down into the tub where the bubbles were now dissolving. Releasing his fists and ran his hands through his hair a few times before he answered.

I do it to ensure you are safe and the color of your room is soothing,”

Brook giggled. “I truly thought you were going to drop your guard and be forthcoming right now.”

Landon pinched his lips together. What is she asking of me to profess a deep love for her?

She placed her leg back down into the water and lifted the other placing the sponge to her ankle. Long strokes hugged the slender shape of her leg.

I am well aware that you are not interested in pursuing a relationship with me in a public romantic way. And I understand why. What if I were to suggest, that just for one night we could be together with no regrets in the morning?” Brook lowered her leg and trickled the water over her bent knees above the water. “If you can agree to not hold anything back than I will too.”

His mind was racing. Part of him wanted to leave and the other part wanted to tell her everything. What if she cannot forget this night happened? Is it possible for us to do this and still look at each other as nothing more than friends?

Landon stepped in the doorway and stood there. “I do it to be close to you. Watching you sleep makes me feel more alive for some reason and I can’t figure out why. Ever since that night I spent with you I have felt the need to be near you.” He took a step closer and gazed into Brook’s eyes. “I lust after you in the craziest way. I keep thinking if I bed you it will stop but my deepest fear is it won’t.”

Brook gazed at him with a shameless plea of longing. He stood before her barefoot and shirtless. His chest was heaving roughly. Her eyes lowered from his perfect torso to his bulging erection. Obvious effects of her teasing displayed across his breeches and she could not help but smile to herself. Brook rose out of the water.

He slowly walked closer to her. “But the biggest reason is that I might get the chance to kiss you again. The temptation of your lips, your kiss is madding to me.”

Landon’s hand slid around her waist and he pulled her to him leaving no space between them. He watched as her mouth open and a small gasp escaped over her lips. Reaching up he rubbed his thump across her full moist lower lip. “Do you think it to be so silly now, Red? All this for just a kiss.” he said.

Each word trickled out in a low needy rhythm that captivated her wholly. She shook her head no in a barely noticeable way. The sensation of his thumb caressing her was weakening her knees all the sudden. Brook’s hands flew to his broad shoulders.

He moved a little closer with his mouth as his thumb still stroked her lip. Brook could wait no more and closed the distance between them with a hard demanding touch as their lips met. His hands moved to either side of her face and he struggled to slow the kiss but as hard as he tried he couldn’t resist her yearning for it.

Picking her up just as he was holding her body he walked with her over to the edge of the bed and set Brook down. She began to pull him down onto her and somehow Landon managed to remove the only piece of clothing that separated their bodies.

His length began to again seep forth with a stronger need for release. He broke their kiss and moved down covering her breast with his mouth. Just that simple shift eased his body slightly. It’s her kiss. God, how could one woman’s lips bring a man to his knees with bursting emit?

The greedy kneading he was doing to her beasts drove her wild not only with his hands but with his tongue. Hard generous flicks of his tongue sent surges of pleasure throughout her body.

Brook moaned as he pushed her breasts together taking up both nipples and sucked hard. He freed them from the warmth of his mouth and repeated with intensity over and over until Brook was arched up and grasping at his neck.

Landon pulled away moving to the side of her beast running his mouth along the underside of her breast. A line of kisses crossed over to the other breast. He gazed up at Brook who had her eyes shut.

Moving down he was careful not to miss any area along waist and trailing across her belly. He had never licked a wet woman before and loved the sexual sensation of it.

Brook wrapped her hands around his arms and pulled him up to face her. She leaned toward him and placed her lips to his. Slow steady their tongues entangled with one another.

He leaned on his elbows beside her head and at first the kiss was gentle. As the seconds past neither of them could restrain for needing to penetrate one another with the deepest of kisses. To Landon nothing could ever be sexier. Both their heads moved without rest. Unfathomable desire to create the most profound kiss was bring them both to the point of release.

Brook drew her knees up inviting him to move closer. Landon positioned his erection at her opening and then swiftly pulled away resting it to her midsection. She could feel a pulsation against her belly. A warm spray tickled her where their bodies met.

Landon let out a long loud groan. He again held back but this time it was painfully hard.

Lifting his head he gazed at her as she stared up at him. I’m not going to last more than three seconds in you. He wanted to say it out loud but had the feeling she already knew. Her eyes were sympathetic in a way and he felt like he failed.

He took hold of her legs and pushed them up towards her head. Brook slid her hands along the sheet at her sides and as she did she felt the sensation of his tongue slip inside her as deep as he could go.

Landon,” she cried.

His hand reached up and touched her in the most sensitive area and he pressed down gently rubbing. Hard thrashing’s of his tongue penetrated her as she grabbed the sheets almost from under her.

Loud moans turned into rapid gasps of whimpers as she began to climax. Landon held her down as her body trembled. One last cry of his name and her body jerked up off the bed with sensations of pleasure unlike anything she has ever felt before.

He waited until her body relaxed before easing his hold on her. Landon moved up the side of her and Brook took hold of his length and began to stroke him with a firm grip.

Landon’s body jerked wickedly. Oh no no no no, Red. He watched her wiggle down the bed. She gazed up at him and very slowly licked her lips with the tip of his length just inches away. Hard throbbing sent his body to a place he knew he could not come back from this time.

Taking his erection she placed him to her lips and rubbed the tip over her mouth. Oh shit! Bloody hell, Red!

With their eyes still locked she opened her mouth and took him in. Slowly she sucked down further until the tip of his length pushed against the back of her throat. Without warning she gagged on him slightly.

He loved it. Landon held the back of her head a pushed in her hot moist mouth deeper. She sucked harder as he pulled back all the way until he left her mouth. Brook quickly took him in again and moved faster as far down as she could.

Landon’s fingers squeezed her hair as his body tightened. With pulsating need he released deep in her throat. He didn’t close his eyes and watched her beautiful lips wrapped around his length for the first and last time.

Brook sat up pulling the sheets with her. Wiping away what spilled out from him she then smiled at him. “I had no clue what I was just doing.”

Landon looked at her with surprise. “Really?”

Yes really.” Brook started to giggle.

He reached out taking her hand he pulled her into his side. “I would not have thought that. You were amazing and I can honestly say I have never before been so aroused up until this night with you, Red.” He trailed a finger up along her arm.

Brook nestled in closer and rests her head on his bent arm. “Will you stay here one more night?” She asked. “In the bed this time.”

He gazed down at her profile. Brushing away a lock of still wet hair from her cheek he answered, “No.”


  1. fantastic.... every time i think this story can`t get any beter but always it does...

    1. Lol thank you! Just wait it's only just started!

      ~ Cary

  2. Wow! This Is So Hot! PleaSe Let Them Have A Happily Everafter.

    1. So I can't kill anyone off? :) Anonymous...come on, lol!

      ~ Cary

  3. I need more please.don't stop here sweet Cary

    1. I'm trying to write as creatively fast as I can :) Sorry I can't go any faster. I'm just happy my internet is back up! Next 2 chapters are coming in the next few days.

      Thank you!!!

  4. Oh sweet Cary...dont u dare do smethin to te 2 couples...i soo love devon md god this stuff is intense...whole day long i keep thinkin about the possibilities of the next post it as fast as you can...

    1. No I would never kill off Devon or Sarah but someone will have to die in this story. I'm so thrilled you are following along and feeling what you are for all these characters. Next chapter is coming tonight!


  5. brook or landon better not die

    1. When I sit down to write I really have no idea where the story is going to go. I am simply the tool for these characters to use. More than half the time I have an image in my head how it is going to play out but it doesn't always move in that direction.

      Brook and Landon will decide their own fate as the story is revealed. Will one of them die? I do not have an answer for that. I know who I want to kill off though :)


  6. This is taking like forever....please post the chapters....u got us all hookd into ur web.....moreovr this page

    1. I'm having writers block. Believe me it's not that I don't want to write and keep everyone waiting. Any suggestions on how to cure it? :)

  7. What's going on with you's been forever since you last posted the last chapter:'( I promised myself not to read another story of yours unless it's completed. Waiting is a killer sweetheart:b

    1. That's a great idea because I am having major writer's block. First time in my life. Sorry you'll just have to wait it out with me.

  8. Im growing really impatient cary when are other chapters coming up?

  9. More Please :) I Hope That Your Writers Block Has Passed, I FiNd Myself Checking For New Chapters Every Other Day. thanks

  10. Why don't you try this out:('strategies for overcoming writer's block'). It may go a long way you know. Can't wait to get to the end of this story

  11. LOVE LOVE LOVE your stories I am hoping that everything turns out good for both couples but I am stuck on Devon and Sara. I absolutely fell in Love with their story. It's so close to my own. I am keeping my fingers crossed that she doesn't forget him. I hope you find a way over your writers block!!!! Best wishes!!!


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Cary ~ Mizz Romantica